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In the dead of the darkest night,
A breathless aria penetrates the frost-bound glass in the window panes.

Gazing into the vast dark world behind my window, i see your eyes, deep worn eyes veiled by young flesh and the crimson flush of your cheeks.
Your haunting eyes brim with experience.

All the while, the aria pours from your mouth, from deep within your soul.

You lithely press your hand to the glass within my window's pane.
I mirror your graceful gesture and feel the warmth radiating from your skin.
For a fleeting moment i catch sight of what you have seen and without warning, you are gone.

Vanished into the hazy blackness.

I am left to stare into the abyss, all has fallen silent. No vestige of your existence remains, but your deep worn eyes will forever haunt my soul.
i really don't know.

Written by AsheDarkRose13. DO NOT COPY MY WORK! PLAGIARISM IS A CRIME!!!! But i really hope that someone will enjoy this. I was nervous about posting things that i have written...
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Aeterus Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very nice piece, you really should write more of this kind
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AsheDarkRose13 Jun 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! I'm glad that someone likes it :D
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Aeterus Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
its very well written
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AsheDarkRose13 Jun 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks ^^
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Wow... that is really good!! You've used some really great words in there too ^^ Vestige and radiating, very nice :D

Don't be nervous about posting these by the way because that one was awesome, honestly :)
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AsheDarkRose13 Jun 10, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! That means a lot! :)
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